People Are Ignorant, But Its Ok

Beryl's picture

polecat
Member posted March 05, 2003 02:04 AM
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okay now. This is the beginning of a song. It's not finished, but I was sort of hoping for some help with what I've got down already. I mean.. like... tell me if it's no good. Heh. I don't write many songs. I'm amazed that this one came out that way. it just sort of... happened. And anyways I'm rambling. So.
FAKE SMILES
I can see that look again
The one that clouds the color of your eyes
And there

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linds's picture

I got quoted!

Wow... um... a leeetle bit scary to know that my words are going other places, but this is the internet, after all. What I wanted to say mostly, Beryl, was "right on". And a note to your would-be flamer: most people are jerks at one point or another. We are often jerks a lot of the time. It isn't a gay thing, it's a human thing. And it's probably just a living being sort of thing -- I'm sure there are some really pissy dolphins somewhere in the world.

~Linds

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Special Envoy to Tea-Drinking Nations for The Movement To Free Oompa Loompa Land From The Tyrannical Rule Of The Evil Capitalistic Despot Willy Wonka And Associates

Leisa's picture

Linds

When did your job change? What happened to the chocolate?

Chief Political Right Hand Woman to Ceo, Founder and First Member of The Movement to Free Oompa Loompa Land from the Tryanicall Capitalsitic Despot Willy Wonka

linds's picture

sigh.

sadly, I was offered an "alternate" position, although I do think I was better qualified for the first one....

~Linds

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Special Envoy to Tea-Drinking Nations for The Movement To Free Oompa Loompa Land From The Tyrannical Rule Of The Evil Capitalistic Despot Willy Wonka And Associates

JB's picture

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JB
Vice President and Drug Tzar of The Movement To Free Ommpa loompa Land From The Tyrannical Rule Of The Evil Capitalsitic Despot Willy Wonka And Associates

Dragon's picture

Agreed! Beryl, sister dear, w

Agreed! Beryl, sister dear, what was all that, I mean i know it was hatrack, but, ack?!?! What the hec!!!

Beryl's picture

sorry

Sorry, I know that was uber confusing. I was in a hurry. Here's a link to the actual page, which is located in the poem section of the young writer's forum of Orson Scott Card's official website. Its probably my favorite and most visited website, I love it so. As a quick run down, Polecat is cool, she just had a slip of the tongue, exellent poet. DEM is rather shifty, but Im bias, and he did apologize prettily. I, of course am Beryl, as I am everywhere on the net. I think it'll be easier to understand in the right formatting.

http://www.hatrack.com/forums/youngwriters/forum/Forum5/HTML/005152.html