“It’s cold as hell out here,
I like this.
It's kinda weird.
Which is good.
I especially like the closet reference thing.
I agree with you. It's good. :)
"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream."
Good, sad, pretty, strange, evocative.
Favorite line: "Wind visible in the uneasy sand."
Sometimes I read things and wish I'd thought to say it like that.
very beautiful poem, i like that it flows like a conversation.