crookedsmile's picture

Yeah, I know. I need help. Haikus shouldn't be this fun.

Thought I had this kicked
I have to admit I'm a
syllable junkie

I can't stop counting
fingers constantly moving
need some therapy

thought I was cured and
put them down for a while
I'm at it again

just started with one
an example for a friend
now I'm hooked once more

worse than heroin
this damn five seven five thing
makes me want to scream

kicking is easy
I'll just stop counting my lines
I'll quit just like that

Who am I kidding
I really don't want to stop
just cut back a bit

never gonna stop
I am a haiku master
ask me why sometime


niks121997's picture


I really like this, innovative and creative. Haikus are awesome!

"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream."

ReLyX's picture


Very likable!

  • The future's not set. There's no fate but what we make for ourselves.
  • Sex is like air. It's not important... unless you aren't getting any.
adbak's picture


and they flow, too. Impressive!