the mouse that roared's picture

This is a song I wrote last summer. It's a little innocent, but oh well. It tears up my heart whenever I think of the music, though.

And then we'd be together
It would work out, you'd see
We'd always be together
Whatever that would be

You'd hold my hand, together
It would work out, I'd see
Forever and forever
You and--me

I'd see
You love me
Forever and forever
And we'd be free
You and me

*musical interlude that I haven't written yet*

We'll never be together
It won't work out, I'll see
We'll never be together
Whatever that would be

I'll always love your singing
The way you smile at me
I'll love you for forever
You won't see

Dreams are very pretty
But pretty just to me
You'll never see my beauty
You and me

I haven't written a song since that one. I guess high school dulls my creative abilities. And I wrote this one so quickly, without any effort. Now I can't efven write a snippet of a song. Oh well...

I suppose I should stop procastinating and get my homework done. Until later...


niks121997's picture


I don't believe I've said hello yet, so this is my grand introduction. Hi!!!!

I liked this song and completely understand how school dulls one's creative abilities. I hope you're able to write more.

"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream."

ACCgirl's picture

Sounds Good.

I like the lyrics a lot. Do you play an instrument too?

the mouse that roared's picture

Yes, I play the violin. And I

Yes, I play the violin. And I sort of play the piano, as in I can plunk out my made up, un-music-theory-ified chords on the piano. But that's pretty much it... :)

KieBem81's picture

hot song! school is horse crap :) keep writing... i like !!!

"If you love someone, tell them for hearts are often broken by words left unspoken"

1 in 3 women think of having sex or experimenting with other women

"Should I smile because we're friends or frown because thats all we'll ever be?"

cnn* :)