Some for Creative Writing. Is it brilliant or just recycled claptrap?

paulada5's picture

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Paladin's picture

Yay for more gay stories!

It's pretty good. I like the way you deal with homophobia in this story.

Constructive criticism: I sort of got lost as to their location, whether they're at the top or the bottom of the stairs. Also, the others in the crows seemed a bit confusing.

Other than that, I liked it.

Dave

pixies_in_the_underworld's picture

my two cents...

brilliant.

bibibutterfly's picture

I liked it! Yay for gay roma

I liked it! Yay for gay romance, tis so sweet. Boy, would those homophobes have gotten a few punches had I been there....-trails off-

Tayli