It's pretty good. I like the way you deal with homophobia in this story.
Constructive criticism: I sort of got lost as to their location, whether they're at the top or the bottom of the stairs. Also, the others in the crows seemed a bit confusing.
Other than that, I liked it.
I liked it! Yay for gay romance, tis so sweet. Boy, would those homophobes have gotten a few punches had I been there....-trails off-