a something im writing

FlameFish08's picture

ummm, ok, i dont usually share my stuff, but today i feel weird so i will. this isnt any poetry or anything, becuase i dont usually ahre that stuff, but maybe one of these days i'll come out of my shell. this is a stroy i've just been working on now and then when i'm bored. i dont really know where its going yet, so please give any input if you have it. even if its negative input, thats cool to. just not too negative i guess. anyway, heres the first part, there will be more later.

It’s funny how people’s lives get mixed up with one another, or don’t. We walk by people every day without ever thinking about them. All it takes is to be in the same place at the same time for someone to come crashing into your life, changing it forever…

I shivered as a cool fall breeze blew right through me. I was only wearing a sweatshirt, since I left the dorm in a rush. I didn’t even have a key or my cell phone. Once I got the phone call, I just had to get out. Thinking back only brought the bad memories.
I tried not to think about it, but I couldn’t. He’s dead, he’s dead. Even though I kept telling myself that, I didn’t really get it. I don’t think I wanted to. Even if I had wanted to acknowledge the fact that the only person left in my life was gone, I probably would’ve gone insane.
One part of myself tried to convince me that I was used to it. One more person leaving me wasn’t a big deal, after all the times it had been done before. But deep down inside I knew it was still a loss. I knew I missed him, but I didn’t really feel sad. I hadn’t even cried yet, which somehow made me feel worse. I guess I felt…numb.
I shivered again and shoved my hands in my pockets. Just get home, I thought, and I walked a little faster.

“Yeah right, like Sara ever did that!

Comments

niks121997's picture

:)

I really liked this entry. It's very true what you wrote about people changing your life. I find that it's usually when you least expect it.

"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream."

KieBem81's picture

i heart this idea- right on :D

"It’s funny how people’s lives get mixed up with one another, or don’t. We walk by people every day without ever thinking about them. All it takes is to be in the same place at the same time for someone to come crashing into your life, changing it forever"

"If you love someone, tell them for hearts are often broken by words left unspoken"

1 in 3 women think of having sex or experimenting with other women

"Should I smile because we're friends or frown because thats all we'll ever be?"

cnn* :)

ledworldnuke's picture

RE: story

I like it alot! ^_^

its entertaining, its well written, and its got good messages :)

"You want us to do WHAT?!?!"
~Chinese wall constructors