w8tin4life's picture

she stands silently
holding every piece of me
never knowing, in my mind
im cradling the hurt

she pushes it further down
hides behind the veil
of laughter and life
while shes stone inside

someone hurt her
this marble angel
encased with black
with courage exuding

she'll never know
deep within me
i hold her languid hand
and ellimanate the meltal tears

we could never be
she is in love
but my heart shatters
as she looks the other way


FlameFish08's picture

deep shit

wow, i had to go back and read this poem over a couple times...its really amazing. i could seriously feel the longing and intensity of this peom. please post anything else you write, i really liked this one.

armadillo's picture

diabetically dangerous

wow, that was awesome! I'm sorry I ever criticized your writing!