to my freind

w8tin4life's picture

yes your lost now
falling in oblivion
twirling into dark crimson
sorrow leaks from your eyes

but fear not my freind
for light comes from darkness
can you see it?
look a little closer

if you search
through the shattered pieces
of your silent world
you'll find something

it is the same thing
that caught you when you fell
the everlasting thing
that can never be weakened

time can not exhaust
force can not break
tears can not blemish
water can not drown

if you squint and look
you can always find
that thing that will not leave
is me

-- shag, you will always have my heart now and forever --

"Love is blind; friendship closes its eyes."


sistinesylph's picture

Wow, I don't know

if it's just the mood I'm in or not, but that was really good. I really liked it. I think it's because you used the word "oblivion."
Keep writing for sure.

"Man it takes a silly girl
to lie about the dreams she has.
But lord, it takes a lonely one to wish
that she had never dreamt at all."