Waiting to Procrastinate

armadillo's picture

I'm feeling something-
I don't know what.
I'm wanting someone-
They don't know who.

I try to tell you-
I don't know how.
Let's go some place-
I don't know where.

I want to love you-
You ask me, "when?"
And I reply,
"Just give me ten!"

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Tjedza's picture

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somehow i see where you're going with that...
its really interesting- i like the way you illustrate the hesitation..
its almost as if the thought is unfinished at the end of the line but immediately proceeding that you cut yourself off...
cool cool cool

"the source of our insecurity has likewise become our intelligence. we know, deep in our hearts that our lives are but a fantasy, bravado- method acting."