crowded solitude

joemamaknows23's picture

i cant cry now
there are people around
i'll wait till its quiet
to bury my head in the ground

no i cant cry now
not in front of them all
i cant let them see me
when im weak, when i fall

i'll hold my head high
in the midst of this crowd
i'll try to hold it in
i wont cry out loud.

if i cried in this audience
i couldnt explain
because i cry cause im lonely
even though in a crowd i remain.

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Cheyennelovesu15's picture

Oh my GOD! You write really g

Oh my GOD! You write really good poems!!!!!! :o

-Cheyenne

joemamaknows23's picture

psh.. u make me blush.. andi

psh.. u make me blush.. andi must give my friend credit forhelping my rhyme with explain. lol
~I am Jack's lack of surprise
~"I need someone physically stronger than me... I am always on top. It's really unfortunate. I am begging for the man that can put me on the bottom. Or the woman. Anybody that can take me down"