Moon and Stars, part II

fairy.'s picture

http://www.oasismag.com/node/view/15614 Part I

Luke and Sam split up at the tall cedar fence that divided their homes. Luke to his medium sized cedar-finished house, which matched the dividing fence and Sam to a slightly smaller dirty looking white house, with junk in the yard and filthy windows.

“I’ll be over in a sec

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Uncertain's picture

Nice. I love your descriptive

Nice. I love your descriptive writing style =]

> > "I'd rather have the heterosexual society changed than my homosexual child change" - Annonymous

devildog's picture

Aw, this is a areally heartwr

Aw, this is a areally heartwrenching story. Luke is so sweet to be doing this. I'm looking forward to the next part-I'm really enjoying the characters, and wonder what'll happen to them next.

~Sam

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Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.
Oscar Wilde

Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live.
Oscar Wilde

Jagged Problems's picture

Sad...

It's a sad story and yet so heartwarming at the same time. Have you considered getting published? You seem like the type.

fairy.'s picture

Thanks y'all, I'm glad it's l

Thanks y'all, I'm glad it's liked. I'm actually still wondering what happens next too. Trying to figure out how to not make it like 15 parts long, lol.

~~Not That I know what I'm talking about of course.~~