do you?

victoria2995's picture

do you even care about what you did to me?
cant you see
how dead i am inside
and i have nowhere to hide
do you care about what you did to me?
do you know how you killed me inside?
its like i already died
you act like its alright
what you did to me that night
i cant get over it
what part dont you get?
i cry all night because of what you did to me
cant you see
how hurt i am inside
you left me nowhere to hide
everywhere i go your there
its like a nightmare
i cant get away from you
i dont know what to do
it will never be alright
what you did to me that night
when we were all alone together dont you see
how much you hurt me
i will never be alright
because of that ONE night

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zoe rose's picture

oh, but its so sad. im sendi

oh, but its so sad.
im sending virtual hugs your way.

Hyacinthus's picture

Excellent

Very nice poetry victoria2995! You rhyme scheme is excellent and your free form organization enhances your message. Keep up the good work. I also want to say that I really have an affinity for the message here because I just recently had an experience thst caused me to feel some of same emotions in the poem. It means you've done your job if you can bring out emotions, keep up the good work. Sorry if none of this made sense, i'm really tired right now.

"The French are glad to die for love, they delight in fighting duels. But I like a man who lives, and gives expensive jewels"

Anonymous's picture

Your poems

Great stuff. Nicely depressing, and you speak for so many. Keep on keepin' on.

AH JUIDGE YE NAE, FOR YE ARE NAE RELEVENT TAE MINE BEIN. NOO GAE AWA!!!!!!!!

victoria2995's picture

thanks

thanks you guys