I wrote this in 6th grade. It was (and still is) my life.

bratalamay's picture

They Don't Know

All my thoughts are shut away.
My thoughts, my feelings, my psyche.
Life goes on day by day,
They all stay hidden from me.
I pick them out one by one,
They all go running back.
I try once more but people say
It's attention that I lack.
If only they knew, I've explained it just once,
What's going on in my head.
When I'm in a daze with a glassy eyed gaze
I'm trying to get back ahead.

(I'll accept comments, questions, constructive critisism, u kno- the works :)


Lil Miss's picture

Nicely written

I liked it. I felt i could relate. well done!