Do you notice?

darla07's picture

have you seen the way
that she looks at me
have seen the way
that you look at her
do you notice her face
and how her expressions change
do you notice at all
do you care

do you notice
at how her face tells
when she'll give you her heart
or give you hell
do you notice anything at all
do notice the things
that she does for you and me
could you give your all
just to be with her I mean
I know its insane
to feel this way
but do you notice at all
do you care at all

do you even see
the glow she gets
when she succeeds
do you know
why she hates picture id's
do you feel the same way for her
that you use to feel for me

do see the way her eyes change colors
when she's in the light
or when she's in the mood to fight
can you tell when she changed her hair
do you see the way she stares
across the room when she doesn't care
do you notice at all
do you even care at all

i guess you don't see
what it is that i see
maybe thats why
she broke up with you
and is going out me

now i see that you heard me
now i see that you see what i see
what beauty is withheld
behind that hard shell
what pain she brings
with her open heart

now do you care
at the way she stares
now do you care
at the way she wears her hair
now do you care
that she doesn't look over there
now you see the joy she brings
now you see
why you never had me
now you see the light within me
now you notice
but now I don't care

Comments

icequeen18's picture

brilliance/madness!

cool poem! Ignore the subject line, it has not much to
do with this comment, lol. I just like doing random things
to draw attention.
"Life is what happens while you are busy
making other plans."
~John Lennon

Anonymous's picture

wow i love this poem... A

wow i love this poem...

A DREAM IS A WISH UR HEART MAKES!!!!!

crookedsmile's picture

cute

cute