a girl in pain

victoria2995's picture

a girl stands here in pain
out in the cold rain
who always stays bottled up inside
and wishes she could run and hide
taking her own life
taking a knife
stabing herself in her broken heart
waiting for the pain to start
she wakes up from her daydream in fear
and as a tear runs down her cheek
she feels so weak
she relizes there is only one thing to do,
make her daydream come true

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Sunny Rays's picture

Not a very happy poem, is it?

Not a very happy poem, is it? That's ok. Sometimes you just have to write out what you feel. It was good! Do you feel a bit better now?

Indifference is the strongest force in the universe. It makes everything it touches meaningless. Love and hate don't stand a chance against it.

Hyacinthus's picture

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: ( Sad poem, quite depressing, but I hope it did help you relieve some of your pain. Feel better!!! Don't give up on life, things WILL get better!!!! I know these things.

"Persuasive speech, and more persuasive sighs,
Silence that spoke, and eloquence of eyes."
- The Iliad (bk. XX, l. 315), (Bryant's translation)