I love you

Inochi's picture

I wrote this poem to show one of my friends that I truly did love them.
I hope it's good, it took me a while to think of some of the things to say.
Tell me if you guys like it or not ^_^

You’ve made me cry
You’ve made me die
You’ve made me smile
If only for a while

Don’t worry
I’m in no hurry
Just because I’m sad
Doesn’t mean I’m mad

I’ll give you a clue
I love you
That’s why I stay
And why I pray

Every day you remind me
Of how it used to be
Before you were here
Or anywhere near

I remember the days
All the different ways
I used to be
But it wasn’t me!

You’ve shown me who I am
You’ve always given a damn
Even when I was mad
Through all the times I was sad

You’ve never given up
Even when I ran out of luck
And for all of this I thank you
For always pulling through

Every time I cry
I feel like I die
I don’t ever want to hurt you
But I know that I always do

I hope you can forgive me
And I hope you can see
That I love you
Through and through

No matter what fights we have
I’m always glad
To hear you say
“It’s okay


Kodak13's picture

One in the same,Two of a kind

One in the same,Two of a kind - Incubus

that was sweet and nice and cool

utter_insanity's picture


This is so sweet! I love it. :)

~~Gay And Here To Stay~~
"Mama I'm strange/The thoughts and the wants are the locks on the back of my brain/I'm descending pretending I'm blending I'm going insane/And they want me to change..." ~ "Mama I'm Strange", by Melissa Etheridge

rapper's picture

you've got talent keep it up.

you've got talent keep it up.its sweet.

I like to rap and girls if you have a problem with it deal with it

Sunny Rays's picture

It's very nice. I think that

It's very nice. I think that they'll love it.

When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself.

the ghost's picture

its cute,i like it If peac

its cute,i like it

If peace and love are so strong,why are there pieces of love that don't belong?-the black eyed peas