Now I Am

Kodak13's picture

there is this gabing hole
inside me somewhere between
my lungs and my stomach
nothing can explain it
noone will explain it
i feel so alone
i feel so useless
but most of all
i feel dead and now i am

wat u think?? i think i can fix it more....it would make a perfect suicide note dont u think....dont worry i wont kill myself!!

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livingdead's picture

i think its a great piece, th

i think its a great piece, though i really hope u wont kill ur self...i may not know u but it would be a great loss of an up and coming poet..:) LD

If your happiness depends on what somebody else does or thinks of you, I guess you do have a problem.