Repeat Repeat

underdarkness's picture

This is the drunken cry of a solo teen,
lost and fallen, stuck in this dream.
To all I fear and all I hate,
I raise my glass and drink till late.

It’s love at best and love at worst.
What we thought was new was last, not first.
Take it as is and we’re gone forever.
Live or die, no matter, scream, “never!

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victoria2995's picture

wow.... that was probably one

wow.... that was probably one of the best poems iv ever heard its in my top 5 favorite poems and iv read ALOT of poems!

Sway's picture

That was awesome. A poetic or

That was awesome. A poetic orgasm! :)
Loved the part "when I had to choose between hell and hell"...

I just want somebody listening to what I say...

underdarkness's picture

:D

Haha, a poetic orgasm. I like that.

This one is being published in my book, so I may have to add your comment somewhere in the back :P

- One Nation, Under Darkness

commander147's picture

That was a really awsome poem

That was a really awsome poem.. definately well refined, likely till the many wee hours of the morning....

I R Eddyoucaytered