i didnt write this poem its just one that im madly in love with! lol please read it!

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They point and laugh.
What makes us different?
They point and laugh.
What makes her different?

And she gets to her room.
Safe from the world.
She shuts her bedroom door.
Safe from the world.

She knows it can't go on.
And she lets the tears fall.
She knows it can't go on.
She wipes them away.

She strides into the kitchen.
She's going to take action.
She grabs the butchers knife.
She's going to take action.

She takes her last breath.
And thinks of her family.
She takes her last breath.
And wonders if they'll miss her.

someone on a different site that i go to wrote this and i love it its title is "taking action" i have no idea why im in love with it, i just love it, what do you think of the poem?

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jomari_15's picture

a nother goth poem i like it

a nother goth poem i like it ;-)

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a nother goth poem i like it ;-)

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Yeah I like it too,its sad bu

Yeah I like it too,its sad but I like it

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