The Magician's Dove (finished product)

Ward's picture

Hoorah! I finished it. I handed it in yesterday, haven't gotten a mark yet. I'm actualy quite proud of it. Here it is:

Sometime's she feels like life is passing by,
She observes, but never joins.
She's not interested in the games they play,
The lives they live, controlled by their loins.

*Chorus*
What happened to love?
What happened to passion?
Seems like these days,
Ignorance has become fashion.

They think they know her,
How she lives, who she loves.
Living in an invisible cage,
She lives the way of the Magician's doves.

She never shows who she really is,
'Cause no one would accept her.
She doesn't care what they'd say
Doesn't save time for insults they send her.

*Chorus*

She searches for her own,
No relief from the reality she hates.
She can't break free,
She suffocates.

Drowning in the intolerance,
Dying inside.
She can't keep it anymore,
She can no longer hide.

She breaks free from her cage,
Spreads her wings for a moment.
Before she can truly live,
She's caught, again, in torment.

She falls hard, in love,
Her knees hit the floor.
Once again, a caged dove,
She can't take anymore.

She was free to love,
But she picked the wrong one.
One who didn't love her,
But used her for "fun".

She had been free,
But got caught once again.
In the web of lies,
She decided the end.

*Chorus*

As her eyes slowly closed,
Her last glimpse of life.
The darkness enclosed her,
And ended her strife.

Now she flies freely,
The freedom she lacked.
Her wings beat the air,
She never looks back.

Love…
Passion…
Love…
Passion.

Comments

Hobbit's picture

I love it, especially the met

I love it, especially the metaphor that you worked through the whole thing

hugs, luck, and peace

So when you're asked to fight a war thats over nothing
Its best to join the side thats gonna win
No ones sure how all of this got started
But we're gonna make 'em God damn certain how its gonna end

Book_Freak's picture

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Fantastic song!! Nice ending as well, and the fluency of the song improved! Great work. ^_^

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"There's a fine line between love and hate
And I don't mind
Just let me say that I like that
I like that"

Briseis's picture

AMAZING

your poem TOTTALY rocks your such a poet!!!!

"Winners never quit, and quitters never quit"