a poem its very well...(the sun will rise) plz read

Kodak13's picture

The Sun Will Rise

There will come soft rain
when we learn to accept it
when we are accepted

there will come soft rain
when we arent scared
when we arent afriad of

there will come soft rain
when we dont lose loved ones
when we arent losed to them

there will come soft rain
when we dont lose one of us
when we arent blamed for it

there will come soft rain
before the sun will rise.

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msquared's picture

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Aw, that was really pretty! Fantastic!

"Those who dream by night, in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that all was vanity; but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, and make it possible." T.E. Lawrence

the ghost's picture

Cool!

I like this its so simple and sweet and great

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent-Eleanor Roosevelt