im writing a story and i want ur help!!!??

Kodak13's picture

ok im writing a story for english....but i want yall help in it....like with experience and ideas...ok here the plot...its about the mental thinkin of sum1 when they r figuring out that there gay, when they come out, and when they have a crush on a straight person, and when they get the girl...but there is so much more to that i want to add a strong vioce to it... and i want people to understand its not a choice to be gay and i want them to know how we feel towards it....so help if u like the idea of the story....and tell me what u think of the idea...ok byz oh and loook at my other journal plz its really important to me...plz...byz

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jeff's picture

Yeah...

I can see why you'd need other's people's help on that, since it is so far outside your own experience. :-)

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SparklingNia's picture

you should read

you should read annie on my mind or keeping you a secret, or a bunch of other lesbian fiction books, they all have the same plot, and it sounds like it's the same as what you're trying to write. There's a collection of short stories called "she loves me, she loves me not" which has a few interesting pieces that might help. Check out your local library, they'll probably have some.

Good Luck!

SparklingNia's picture

sry

rawr... im sry, i'm having internet problems :(

Kodak13's picture

this is not to be mean

well my libary a little bit in the rural...i live in brownwood tx pop: 25000....ther towns still a little bit prejudce which suxs for me cuz i cant seem to get a girl so im datin a guy

"The cure is if you let in just a little more love
I promise you this, a little's enough" - AVA

SparklingNia's picture

oh, that sucks i'm sorry u ha

oh, that sucks i'm sorry u have to date a guy, i hope he's good to you at least

Kodak13's picture

he does

he does....but still i want a girl

"The cure is if you let in just a little more love
I promise you this, a little's enough" - AVA