Your Beauty Falls Like Rain

msquared's picture

[I wish I was actually writing this about someone in particular... :-/]

Your beauty falls like rain
Soft and innocent and true
Breathing life into the world

Your beauty falls like rain
Tracing rainbows in its wake
Building temples in the air

Your beauty falls like rain
Only lasting for a while
Nature murders every child

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patnelsonchilds's picture

OUCHIES!

YOWZA!

This one bites hard at the end!

- Pat Nelson Childs
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the ghost's picture

....

I know I always say this but I really like this one!I think this is one of my favourites

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent-Eleanor Roosevelt

Hobbit's picture

wow, i agree with the ghost,

wow, i agree with the ghost, that one is my favorite, especially the irony between the person in question being rain and the nature doing the mudering

hugs, luck, and peace

and none has conquered but love
a girl's glance working the will of heaven
pleasure to her alone who mocks us
merciless aphrodite
- anitgone, ode III