Finaly GLM poem attempt.

ReinbowGrl's picture

Name: Amy
Oasis name: ReinbowGrl
Location: Lakewood, Washington
Bio: I was born in this small town and I still live in this small town. I am still looking for the escape hatch. There are things in life that completely change you forever. Those things for me just seem to happen in tiny towns that nobody has ever heard of. The most difficult thing in the world is being in love. If you can handle that, you'll survive whatever else life has to throw at you.
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You have taken everything from me
Everything, including my words
All I can do is look away, useless
I can’t even find the fire
That used to burn
In my veins,
Every time you would strike
Just walk away,
There’s no use pretending,
Because there are words
That you will never say
All of your conditional
“I love you’s”
Couldn’t fix this
Too many years have gone by,
Not being good enough for you
But you couldn’t see,
That this wild-eyed dreamer
Would have done anything
Just to be adored by you in return
But I stand here loving you,
While you just walk away
Oh, what a shame
That I couldn’t have been like you
Perfect in every way
It’s another game of fatal attraction
You can’t hate the one who hurts you.
I can’t hate you, and I can’t hurt you.
After what you’ve done, all this time,
You’d think it would be easy
I’m still your little girl.
But you’re never proud of it.

Toph's picture

Oh, I really like it! Cute

Oh, I really like it! Cute ^.^
The only line that doesn't really seem to click in right is the last one. At least it seems like it to me. Maybe, like...
"But I've never heard you say
I love you and I'm proud"

I have no idea. Just throwing thoughts out there.

~May the spirits guide your every assure you please her in all the right places XD