Okay, so I was reading my little, random poem last night, and realised that both stanzas are almost haiku. So I rewrote it as two haiku. Here goes:
dark sky above me
cool grass beneath my pale skin
wind plays with my hair
stars twinkle above
are there planets high up there?
soft breath in my ear
I'm not a huge fan of haiku, but I sorta like these. And they just happened, so yeah. Don't blame me if they suck, and don't blame my muse (she's my girlfriend, and I'd have to beat you up)