My GLM poem...FINALLY...COMENTS PLEASE!

ReinbowGrl's picture

I can't move on,
but oh how I wish I could.
You're in every piece of me
and I'm just a fragment of you.
Loving you is a one way street
and I'd kill to get off
where the crossroads meet.
I need love and you're just a liar
So don't tell me I'm wrong.
I really thought we belonged.
I could so easily ruin what you have.
Because honestly, what would she say
once she saw your sweet words?
Yet you can do this, so convincingly
without a guilty heart.
Tell me you care, say you'll be there.
But if you want me with nobody else,
be my somebody.
I've got a list of sins,
and nothing can distract quite like you.
You're with her and I'm alone
and I'm wishing she was me.
But I'd like a second chance
with forever, and not with you.
Would it be so shocking
if I could give my heart away
and never take it back?
Boy, Girl, younger, older,
I don't care. I just want to be okay.
I'd like to find my other half.
The good one, my equal.
And I know I've got time,
time to live and learn and love.
I could even live with friendship.
A best friend.
Somebody I could call at 3am
because I had a nightmare.
No pressure, no promises
disguised as "I love you".
Something that would cause me
no heart ache, no heart break.

Feebum's picture

your poem

Did you write this about yourself??? If so, you deserve better...your self-esteem is suffering at the hands of someone that obviously has no respect for you. Just my 2 cents....been there...married it....& divorced it later! I can't say life is perfect, but I'm OK...I don't dwell on it because he's not worth all that!

fox333's picture

whats GLM? "I feel like Nacy

whats GLM?

"I feel like Nacy Drew in the mystery of the midlife crisis."
-Roger Bannister
The Stepford Wives