Two Old-New Songs

underage_thinker's picture

I wrote these over the summer. The first one, I wrote music for as well, and the second, I wrote the music for last night. I'll try to record it, but my throat really hurts and I can't sing.

Survival and Rescue

Other people push and pull
trying to get inside my small, dark world
I was blind to those futile tries
Nothing felt behind those eyes

Oppression coated me
In an eggshell
I was growing
and now break free

In a membrane I floated around
sometimes I heard the slightest sound
Suddenly a crack from outside
I asked and my soul replied

Oppression coated me
In an eggshell
I was growing
and now break free
Try to see the light of day
I will show you
but please help me
lead the way

Walking through a green field to the other side
The sun it is not lying
I always want to hide

Over bridges full of bubbles
control is mine, without trouble
Now hatred us surrounded by
a
yellow
fire

Oppression coated me
In an eggshell
I was growing
and now break free
Try to see the light of day
I will show you
but please help me
lead the way

Black & White (this title subject to change)

Hopes of mine
Childhood, waste of light
A teddy bear held so tight
just as soft as your hair

Is it real?
The one I pretend to be
My grin vanished under me
and you ask what is wrong

Hyperactivity
A bang so close that I can see
the fear in your eyes
My pillow is loneliness
trying to hide from all the stress
this game that we play

And I can see the future's past before me
and I can feel what they've been telling me
all these years
and I don't know why
but everything feels right inside of me
I don't know why

A rip can't bring
my feeling tumbling in
but my eyes stay dry somehow
Wait in the gateway to hell

Hyperactivity
A bang so close that I can see
the fear in your eyes
My pillow is loneliness
trying to hide from all the stress
this game that we play

Comments

Fiona Rosge's picture

i like them

i like them both, i think i like the last one better tho, ill have to read them a couple more times, to go into more depth then that but yes i like them both, ur writing is good and unique.

underage_thinker's picture

Yeah, I wrote the second one

Yeah, I wrote the second one a few weeks later...
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I find you quite amusing, and I’m sure you love me too, But sadly I am Lesbian, Though I’ll pretend for you
-M.A.A.

Fiona Rosge's picture

ok, well i like there both

ok, well i like there both good but a little but to repeative, i still like the last one better,tho what did u mean about the title?you may be able to make them longer also.

let your voice heal and then YOUTUBE YOUTUBE YOUTUBE!!!!!XD