Caged Spirit

Anonymous's picture

It's alone...
it's dying...
it's pathetic...
though it's trying...

A caged spirit...
locked away...
you can't hear it...
but that's okay...

is it a demon?
Is it an angel?
is it human?
is it animal?

It is different...
so they caged it...
it's indifferent...
time has aged it...

A caged spirit...
locked away...
you can't hear it...
but that's okay...

why is it here?
Was it sent from above?
Did it crawl from below?
does it bring a dove?
Does it carry a bow?

Who could know except Him...

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Fiona Rosge's picture

uh

i like it all except the end where it says "Why is it here?" and on to "Does it carry a bow?" other then that i love it. thats really good.
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would she, could she been thinking of me? all along
and if thats true, would she tell me the truth?
Cause its a long way down when your hopes are high as mountains
and i am worried that im falling for u

WantsOut's picture

Couldn't think of how to

Couldn't think of how to write that last paragraph...

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"I'm not the only one
Staring at the sun
Afraid of what you'd find
If you take a look inside.
Not just deaf and dumb
I'm staring at the sun
Not the only one
Who's happy to go blind."
- U2 "Staring at t

Fiona Rosge's picture

Ah thats ok, its just really

Ah thats ok, its just really i think it takes away from everything, but if you like it go ahead im just suggesting
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I used to be scared of
Letting someone in
But it gets so lonely
Being on my own
No one to talk to
And no one to hold me
I'm not always strong
Oh, I need you here
Are you listening?