In our world

underage_thinker's picture

in our world
clouds soar above horizons
boundaries nevermore

in our world
meaning is everything
just
conceptualize
idealize
romanticize

'cuz in our world hope resides
and the truth replies
'cuz in our world we collide

in our world
the seasons go by
we compromise
by holding each other closer
in the wintertime
in the summer we run free
and in the fall we collect
and in the spring new growing grass
survives

in our world
poisoned apples touch your hair
but i respond

a flurry of anger
a touch of love
no one can break it apart

please open up my eyes
please open up my eyes
please open

in our world hope resides
and the truth replies
'cuz in our world
we collide

in our world
the masters we're told to respect
have no control
our spirits fly as high
as we thought possible
and more

'cuz in our world
spirits fly

Comments

neolon's picture

Beautiful

that was beautiful. i agree with the line "we compromise by holding each other closer in the winter and in the fall we collect." it resounds for me. thank you

WantsOut's picture

I LOVE IT!!! A FELLOW POET

I LOVE IT!!! A FELLOW POET WHO HAS OUTDONE ME!!! I'M GIDDY!!! I MUST OUTDO YOU!!! HEEHEE!!! THANK GOD I'M ALMOST DONE WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER OF MY BOOK!!! I WILL BLOW YOU AWAY!!! HEEHEEHEE!!!!!
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"I'm not the only one
Staring at the sun
Afraid of what you'd find
If you take a look inside.
Not just deaf and dumb
I'm staring at the sun
Not the only one
Who's happy to go blind."
- U2 "Staring at t

underage_thinker's picture

Wow. I've never thought of

Wow. I've never thought of myself as a very good poet......

but I'm sure your writing is better than mine.
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I find you quite amusing, and I’m sure you love me too, But sadly I am Lesbian, Though I’ll pretend for you
-M.A.A.

Fiona Rosge's picture

omg

Damn now im crying. omg i love it, i no ive said this but....omg. its better then Come What May. its better then the SCENE in Moulin Rouge when they were sing Come What May (look it up on youtube.com if its there,that scens beautiful) thats better then amazing i just cant say it. Why the hell do you have to make me so tounge tied??
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I used to be scared of
Letting someone in
But it gets so lonely
Being on my own
No one to talk to
And no one to hold me
I'm not always strong
Oh, I need you here
Are you listening?

underage_thinker's picture

:D ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

:D
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I find you quite amusing, and I’m sure you love me too, But sadly I am Lesbian, Though I’ll pretend for you
-M.A.A.

xmoonlitxkissesx3's picture

wow!

that's REALLY great! it's deep too....makes me feel all tingly inside! teehee...you got talent there. definitely. =]

underage_thinker's picture

Aw

Aw thanks...
:D
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I find you quite amusing, and I’m sure you love me too, But sadly I am Lesbian, Though I’ll pretend for you
-M.A.A.

underage_thinker's picture

Okay, I realized that I kind

Okay, I realized that I kind of forgot to type up the second page...
So I'll find that as soon as possible and post it....

Wait a sec... I did.
When did I do that???
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I find you quite amusing, and I’m sure you love me too, But sadly I am Lesbian, Though I’ll pretend for you
-M.A.A.