she will be my heaven

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i was happy in a very emo way so i wrote this short store

she will be my heaven

there were once two girls
one by the name of maggie and the other kaylee
they had been best friends for many years
then one day kaylee left...
she was forced to move to a far off state
and so kaylee and maggie would talk every day on the phone for hours with out end
months pased by
then years
and yet they would still talk every day
untill one day kaylee called maggie in tears with the thought of death on her mind
muffled and in tears kaylee said, "im sorry baby.

i love you.

more than you know..."
maggie could tell in her voice that something was terribly wrong
then replyed in a weak and sensitive voice, "i know the love you feel
every time i think about you i feel my heart beat faster
yet it feels like life is slowing down
i cant go 5 minutes with out my heart skiping a beat due to the thought of you flashing through my mind
more then anything i have ever known i know that there is no possible love that could be stronger then mine for you
and maybe just maybe your love for me could match that of witch i have for you
but trust me i know the love you feel
for i feel it burn within me every second of every day"
kaylees tears became more frantic and all she said in responce was, "im so sorry"
then hug up the phone
the next day maggie got a call from kayleess parents telling her that kaylee had taken her life that night
maggie became cold and lifeless in the months to fallow
every night she would wish for death or something worse to take over her to end the numbness she felt
life had no meaning without the sound of her voice
time could not move to heal with the abcens of her love
and so maggie did the unthinkable
in a dark night she took her life leaveing only a note that said,"and for my love i will part with this life of torment.i can not breath the toxic air that is all around me with out her. she was my life. and now she will be my heaven..."

Meghan D

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shewillbeloved's picture

I absolutly love this

I absolutly love this part.
"and for my love i will part with this life of torment.i can not breath the toxic air that is all around me with out her. she was my life. and now she will be my heaven..."
Good write. =]

love her purely or don't love her at all