jacjessen90's picture

Our Poem (or your choice of title)

soothe thy inner flame
it burns thy soul & body
not known is it though

life both fair and fun
never one to pick a fight
eight-striped coloured flag

blade and chalice meet
from their union, comes one more
to the eyes a blade

in his heart of hearts
he feels as a chalice wrapped
entombed within life

when will eyes uncloud?
true beauty is not direct,
look beyond the terms!

in one's life one falls
be it once or many times
can you choose who for?

the boy who moved in?
Sue from fourth grade chemistry?
love could choose either

is this truly wrong?
people, high powers, listen!
how is love a sin?

if we truly love
each other, then you have not
the power of 'nay'

why should just one love,
be the one condoned in church?
why matters gender?

why should we be barred
from true love, with our soul mate?
or a set of vows?

(hey, could y'all read this and tell me whacha think? and if you think of a better title just write it in)

Alyska's picture

I like it.

It's very emotional, and it sounds like it comes from the heart.
It's also very good from the literature standpoint. It flows very well.

You could also call it "Our Love", but that's just my suggestion...

"When you can't walk you crawl, and when you can't do that you find someone to carry you" ~Firefly

cupio17's picture

I like it. . . A lot!!!!!

I like it. . . A lot!!!!! it's really deep and emotional . . .

'The Greatest thing You'll Ever Learn is Just to Love and Be Loved in Return'
-'Moulin Rouge'