im hosting a poetry event here in omaha might read this one tell me yes or no

undead_poet's picture

Friendship is forever no matter what you do. Friends are always there for you no matter what you do. There a shoulder to cry on when your sad. Their there for you through the good and bad there respectful and never lead you astray. They’re there for you every day. Friendship lasts forever that I know is true, and when your day is cloudy their there to make it blue.

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hellonwheels's picture

is think it's good.

but i liked your 'state of the world' one better. lol

Mental wounds not healing, driving me insane, i'm goin' off the rails on a crazy train- the ozzman

lordmomofenixed's picture

great!

but the whole friendship-poetry-stuff is kinda played out, im sorry. the way u described it, its sorta like a cliche. step away from the denotation of friendship and write something more... abstract. sorry to be so critical, but im a poet too. and ive seen too many cliches. lol. keep up the good work, tho. good luck on the omaha thing!

a psychotic pencilist, moe

undead_poet's picture

true you are

you werent too harsh that is true. there are too amny friendship poems

~so sayth the undead, HEED HIM WELL!