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undead_poet's picture

The world brought forth a girl named Liz; her heart was of pure gold. Her acquaintance it was paradise, her beauty a story untold. They made a girl they called her Liz, why I do not know. Life is sweet content am I to know to her I may go. I would go to the end of the world for this girl. She is like the royal crown pearl. I loved this girl with all my heart; I hoped that we would never part. Now she’s gone my life left dull, how could I resist loves pull? She left me hollow not the same, I still daily think of her name. She was so pretty she made me sigh, now she’s gone I wonder why? She left my heart a broken mess; I truly love her I now confess. I wish she would of never left, because my heart it is now cleft. Now she’s gone all I do is cry, I sit in my room and scream out why. I never thought she would leave me, with her spirit so wild so free. The world brought forth a girl named Liz oh I love her so. Now that she has left my life, I have no were to go

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ferrets's picture

hmmm

im not much on poetyr, but ilike it :)

"...I find it kinda funny,I find it kinda sad, that the dreams where i am dieing are the best I've ever had..." -gary jules

hellonwheels's picture

its good

Mental wounds not healing, driving me insane, i'm goin' off the rails on a crazy train- the ozzman