New poem! ^_^

ChrisH1551's picture

It's unfinished. heellppp meee!

Take another puff;
Cut a little deeper;
Swallow the bottle;
Whatever it takes to end it.
The pain. The tears. The hurt.
Just to stop that flow.
Never ending
Right into your heart, your soul.
The pain I feel.
How long will it last?
A pistol rests in my hand.
BANG! A shot to the head.
End it all in a flash of white.

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lonewolf678's picture

I hate to break it to you,

but there are literally hundreds if not thousands of poems just like these. Although it reflects on how often everyone feels the same emotions and somehow we are all not so different after all.

ChrisH1551's picture

You know, I really don't

You know, I really don't care if there are hundreds of poems just like these, because this one was written by me, for me, and it expresses my feelings. Those other poems are written by other people, and are not my exact feelings. So in now way, shape, or form are those poems related to mine, in my eyes.

lonewolf678's picture

I never said they were your exact feelings

My point will be quick and blunt, people write sucidal poems all the time. And that is relative to others. That is not to say you have no individuality, but just to say, I've seen this too many times before.

To another point, Why did you write this anyway?

ChrisH1551's picture

No specific reason. Just

No specific reason. Just feeling down in the dumps recently, and I have no clue why. o_o