Poem: What A Life

MetalHead77's picture

I wouldnt expect you to understand,
to lend a hand,
to help another man,

I wouldnt expect you to care,
given the incredible pain you bear,

I wouldnt expect you to see,
that nothing in life is free,

Your mind so young and body so old,
producing offspring in your mold,

And even after everything said,
you laugh at me, and beg,

What a life you live,

What a life you give,

what a life.

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Comments

RainbowZy's picture

Good!

I have officially "liked" your facebook poem-page. This is really good!! I can hear this becoming a song with lots of loud guitar :D

But it's also a really good poem :)

MetalHead77's picture

Thank you

haha thank you for the "like"

and there would indeed need to be some very loud guitar if i made it into a song lol