625539's picture

hey guys

i'm looking for some honest + constructive critique on some collages i did for my photography course

you can see them here :



MacAvity's picture


I like them.
(Sorry if that's not very constructive...)

Quietwarrior's picture


i like them, but i seem to be more drawn a lot to your landscape images such as the couple of pentagon shaped light things, its very good? The running in the birds and the collages at the start with the texts are also nice. The only thing is that, it sounds mean but sometimes i feel the girl with the ginger hair looks a bit to trying hard in performing that startled expression, but that may be just because her face was right for what you wanted to direct. She may look better more relaxed and subdued but its whatever you want to project. Also is their any theme that ran through them or is it more unpredictable.