angel syndrome's picture

Honeycomb sweetness dripping from bee-stung lips ; the sensuality of your proximity ; your finger in my mouth ; cider-built rêveries.

Your oneness, all-encompassing
My self, imaginary.


angel syndrome's picture

further, a question :

when you use your hand do you touch me, the boy, or me, the infirmity?

elph's picture

After repeated readings...

...a slight change in punctuation would greatly facilitate comprehension: "...touch me, the boy --- or me, the infirmity?"

Now... I understand! :)

angel syndrome's picture

thank you! I struggle so

thank you! I struggle so much with punctuation...

elph's picture

As do I, as well!

I use punctuation very idiosyncratically... largely to control flow of speech and to enhance intelligibility (this latter consideration is all the more important if I don't really have anything intelligent to say). :)