ive got Blacklight and Most Major Characters ready for the story but The Main Villain in this Story, Update, i need help with him, tell me if this is ok:
He was a High-Ranking Soilder where Blacklight was being held, after Blacklight escaped his Cell and slaughtered his way through the NightTEK Holding Building, he encountered Update before Update had got his powers which he was called Jack Hallson, so much like all the Night Watch Troops and Spec Ops in the building the had no idea how to stop Blacklight so they were pretty much all Slaughtered, he was severely wounded during the Brake Out.
During the fight, Jack's wife and child were accidently killed by Night Watch and blamed it on Blacklight, of course REVENGE!, so as Night Watch fails to contain the destructive power of Blacklight, Jack under goes a updated and more strength based version of what Blacklight did to become a super-powered Shapeshifter but with different powers.
- on there own both have Shapeshifting limited to their arms but Blacklight under the right conditions can shape shift his entire body while Update can only do his Arms
- Update is much stronger than Blacklight is (both FAR stronger than any human) but Blacklight has better agility and the ability to Uber Jump, while Update is not very agile and cannot jump high
- Update can regenerate at a faster rate than Blacklight can
- Their Shapeshifting is different,
Black light can make large, thick Sword like Blades while Update can make Thin, Long claws
Blacklight can make a Spear Whip, Blacklight can make giant Fists Blacklight can make a Dark Cannon, Update can make a needle fist that fires explosive Needles
Blacklight can make a wall of pure dark and Biomass that is weak but can aid him in Escape while Update can create shields of biomass on his arms to protect him
so they fight alot on various arenas as well as mutants and Black Watch fight too
he remembers everything, and denies what Blacklight has explained to him which is true, he blindly follows Mr. Black the leader of the Black Super Corporation and the mastermind responable for everything
what do you think